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Hello GH, Please, I'd really appreciate to gather some feedback on design, messaging and pricing on my product: https://www.cast.watch Best, Jose

  • SK

    Sean Kirby

    over 1 year ago #

    It's a nice looking page. I like the design. I think the copy is the area where you have the biggest opportunity for improvement..

    It's good that you are leading with a benefit over a feature, but the headline doesn't really work. I get what you are trying to say, but subscribers are people. You don't turn them into revenue. You generate revenue from them. This disconnect is enough to distract from the message.

    In addition, it makes it sound like this solution is only for people who haven't yet monetized their content marketing efforts. Maybe it is, but it seems pretty limiting.

    One final thought on the headline: I would see if you can get a little more specific/concrete. How much of an increase in revenue over a specific timeframe?

    The larger issue is that the rest of the page never follows through on that benefit. How will this CRM result in more revenue? You need tp pay that off.

    The features copy needs work. The first is a big run-on sentence. And they all lack excitement. Help prospects understand how those features benefit them. If possible directly tie them to the main benefit. You should also explore other subhead options. Intrigue people.

    It's lacking elements that build trust. Why should anyone believe this will get the results you say? Include things like testimonials, client logos, # of users, etc. as social proof.

    Finally, your CTA is to start a free trial, but there are no details on that offer. How long is the trial? What is included? How does it differ from the free plan option?

    I hope that helps. If you need help on specific messaging, feel free to reach out. Best of luck!

  • AS

    Arsalan Sajid

    over 1 year ago #

    The look of the page is really nice. If you consider following things on the page then I think it might become perfect.

    - Email subscription box is a bit out of theme, make it white.
    - Subheading (shoulder) can be written better, sentence structure would be better.

  • JA

    Justin Adelson

    over 1 year ago #

    I agree with Sean and Arsalan about the copy. It does look like you have added "Start Free 7-Day Trial" on your CTA, which Sean recommended.

    Overall, the one suggestion I want to make is to add some motion above the fold. YouTube is a video platform with moving, dynamic content, which your landing page does not reflect. I would recommend adding some sort of animation or video to make it look more dynamic.